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Sunday, August 19, 2012

समीक्षा प्रिया तुम्हारा गाँव - पद्मभुसन नीरज









v'kksd ^vatqe* ds cgqjaxh nksgs
&in~EkHkw"k.k uhjt
      ^nksgk* Hkkjrh; dkO; dh izkphure fo/kk gSA dYgM+ vkfn ls nksgs dk izkjEHk fn[kkbZ nsrk gSA ohjxkFkk dky esa cgqr lqUnj&lqUnj nksgksa dh jpuk dh xbZA i`Fohjkt jklks] gehj jklks] [kqeku jklks vkSj ohly nso jklks vkfn ml le; ds izeq[k dfo gSaA mlh le; dk ,d nksgk gS &
Hkyk gqvk tks ekfj;k] cfgu gekjk dar A
      yksdthou ds dfo;ksa us Hkh viuh ckr vukfn dky ls nksgs ds :i esa gh dghA nksgk ljyrk ls gksBksa ij cSB tkrk gSA ,d tudfo dk fy[kk nksgk fdruk ekfeZd gS &
js  ekVh  ds  dwYgM+s]  nsÅ¡  rks;  pVdk; A
tks fi; ds fgr gSa cus] murs fpidr tk; AA
      blesa ukf;dk ds gksaB  ls nw/k ;k NkN ihrs gq, dqYgM+ dh fdukjh fpid tkrh gS rc og dqYgM+ ls dgrh gS fd gs dqYgM+! esjs ;s gksB fiz;re ds fy, cus gSa] rw us buls fpidus dh /k`"Vrk dSls dh\ rc dqYgM+ bldk tks mRrj nsrk gS] og cM+k ekfeZd gS &
ykr  lgh  ?kw¡lk  lgs] lgs okj ij okj A
bu gksBu ds okLrs] flj ij /kjs v¡xkj AA
      thou ds vklikl ds izrhd gh bu dfo;ksa us fy;s vkSj muds }kjk nks iafDr;ksa dh bl dfork esa cM+h gh ekfeZd vfHkO;fDr gqbZA ukFk laiznk; ds ckn lar laiznk; dh tks ijEijk pyh mlesa thou ds vk/;kfRed lR;ksa dks mn~?kkfVr djus okys lqUnjre nksgs fy[ks x,] tSls dchj dk ;g nksgk &
pyrh pkdh ns[kdj fn;k  dchjk  jks;A
nks ikVu ds chp esa lkcqr cpk u dks;AA
      dchj ds iq= deky us bldk lVhd lek/kku Hkh izLrqr fd;k gS&
pyrh pkdh dky dh filS ldy lalkj A
fyiV x, tks ewB ls fils u ,d gq ckj AA
      ;gk¡ ewB vkRerRo dk izrhd gS A ukud] lsuk] iyVw] jSnkl] jghe vkfn us tkfr&ikfr ds /kekZMacjksa dk fojks/k djrs gq, rc ds lekt esa lejlrk ykus dk iz;k; fd;k A fdlh us bls nksgk dgk] fdlh us nwgk] fdlh us nwgjk] dchj ds nksgs lk[kh dgyk, A lk[kh dk vFkZ gksrk gS lk{kh ;kuh xokg A HkfDrdky ls igys tk;lh us in~ekor esa lqUnj&lqUnj nksgs fy[ks A rqylh ds uhfrijd nksgs rFkk jghe [kku[kkuk ds nksgs vius le; ds Js"Bre nksgs gSa A ;gk¡ ,d izlax Lej.kh; gS& rqylh vkSj jghe nksLr Fks] ,d gkFkh dks vius flj ij /kwy Mkyrs gq, ns[kdj rqylh us iz'u fd;k &
/kwfj /kjr fut 'kh'k ij dgq jghe dfgdkt A
nwljh iafDr esa jghe mRrj nsrs gSa &
ts jt eqfu iRuh  rjh]  lks  <w¡<r  xtjkt AA
      jhfrdky ds nksgksa esa lokZf/kd lqUnj nksgs fcgkjh us fy[ks gSa A fcgkjh ds nksgksa esa ;ed vkSj 'ys"k dk vn~Hkqr lkSUn;Z ns[kus dks feyrk gS A xax] nso] efrjke vkfn us Hkh ml le; lqUnj nksgs fy[ks gSa jhfrdky ds mijkar vk/kqfud dky esa nksgs dh ijEijk lekIrizk;% gks xbZA fNV&iqV dHkh&dHkkj nksgk fn[kkbZ fn;kA njvly vk/kqfud dky esa [kM+h cksyh us dkO;&Hkk"kk dk LFkku ys fy;k ysfdu fQj Hkh egkdkO;ksa ds chp esa nksgs vkrs jgs A Nk;kokn esa nksgk fy[kk gh ugha x;k A Nk;kokn ds fonzksg ds :i esa cPpu us Nk;kokn ds vkdk'kh; dF;] Nk;koknh Hkk"kk dk fojks/k djrs gq, dfork dks lkekU; thou ls tksM+k vkSj tu&tu ds chp ys vk, A budh dfork ds izHkko ds dkj.k yksx dfo lEesyuksa dh vksj vkdf"kZr gq,A blds ckn dfo;ksa us xhr dks lokZf/kd yksdfiz;rk iznku dh vkSj ns'k ls fons'k rd igq¡pk;kA blds ckn nq";ar dqekj ds ^lk;s esa /kwi* uked x+t+y laxzg dks tks yksdfiz;rk feyh mlls vkdf"kZr gksdj x+t+y fy[kus okyksa dh ck<+ vk xbZA xhrdkj xhr NksM+dj x+t+yksa dh vksj Hkkxus yxs A ckt+kj dk ,d fu;e gS fd fMek.M ls vf/kd lIykbZ gksus yxrh gS rks yksx fQj mldh rjQ+ u ns[kdj nwljh fn'kk dh vksj ns[kus yxrs gSa] QyLo:i vkt x+t+y ds leku gh nksgkdkjksa dh ck<+ Hkh fn[kkbZ ns jgh gSA 'kk;n gh dksbZ ,slk xhrdkj] x+t+ydkj gks tks nksgk u fy[k jgk gksA
      nksgs dk Hkfo"; cgqr mTToy gSA ysfdu nksgk fy[kus okyksa ls eSa ,d ckr t+:j dguk pkgw¡xk fd nksgk] dkO; dh og dyk gS tks gksBksa ij rqjUr cSB tkrh gS] blfy, bldh Hkk"kk izlkn xq.k ;qDr ysfdu dF; dk xkEHkh;Z fy, gksuh pkfg, &
tks tu&tu ds gksB ij jgs vkSj jfp tk; A
,slk lqUnj nksgjk] D;ksa u ân; dks  Hkk; AA
      x+t+y ds 'ksjksa ls ;fn dksbZ dkO;&fo/kk VDdj ys ldrh gS rks og flQ+Z nksgk gh gS] vkSj mldh dkO;&dyk dk ewy rRo ;s gS fd &
xkxj  esa  lkxj  Hkjs  eqnjh  esa  uojRu A
vxj u ;s nksgk djs] gSa lc O;FkZ iz;Ru AA
      orZeku esa nksgk fy[kus okyksa esa cgqr lkjs uke fy, tk ldrs gSa ftuesa MkW- dq¡vj cspSu] gLrhey ^gLrh*] gjsjke ^lehi*] funk Qkt+yh] jktxksiky flag vkfn ds lkFk v'kksd ^vatqe* dk uke Hkh vkrk gS A
      v'kksd ^vatqe* cgqeq[kh izfrHkk ds /kuh jpukdkj gSa A dfork esa xhr] x+t+y] nksgk] gkL;&O;aX;] y?kqdFkk] leh{kk] dgkuh vkfn ds lkFk&lkFk fp=dyk] laiknu vkSj vfHku; ds {ks= esa Hkh vkidh et+cwr idM+ gS A
      v'kksd vatqe nksgs ds {ks= esa vius laiknu vkSj ys[ku ls vPNh igpku cuk pqds gSa A vHkh rd vkids laiknu esa nksgs ds 6 ladyu (jaxkjax nksgs] nksgs ledkyhu] nksgk n'kd&1]2]3 rFkk ubZ lnh ds izfrfuf/k nksgkdkj½ vk pqds gSa tks dkQ+h pfpZr jgs gSa& blds vfrfjDr Lo;a laikfnr dkO;&if=dk ^iz;kl* ds nks nksgk fo'ks"kkadksa ds lkFk gh ^izrki 'kksHkk* if=dk ds nksgk fo'ks"kkad dk vfrfFk laiknu Hkh fd;k gS A dqy feykdkj ;gh dgw¡xk fd v'kksd vatqe dks nksgs dh le> gS A
      laxzg ^fiz;k rqEgkjk xk¡o* esa vatqe ds fofo/k fo"k;ksa ij fy[ks nksgs gSa& iqLrd dk izkjEHk izse dh dksey vuqHkwfr;ksa ds lkFk gqvk gS&
vkea=.k  nsrk jgk] fiz;k rqEgkjk xk¡o  A
liuksa esa pyrs jgs] jkr&jkrHkj ik¡o AA

e/kqe; ca/ku ck¡/kdj dy ykSVh  ckjkr A
gjh dk¡p dh pwfM+;k¡ [kudha lkjh jkr AA
      csVh dh fu;fr dks izdV djrk gqvk ;g nksgk ekfeZd gS&
csVh  pqIih lk/k ys  er  dj  O;FkZ  loky A
^ihgj* ij Hkkjh iM+s  D;ksa bd fnu llqjky AA
      ekSle ij Hkh v'kksd vatqe us izHkkoh nksgs fy[ks gSa&
ikol  dk  vn~Hkqr  vlj  ns[kk geus fe= A
fp=dkj  us  j¡x  fn,]  gjs&gjs lc  fp= AA
      tkM+s vkSj pquko dh tqxycanh&
fQj  dacy c¡Vus yxs vk;k ikl  pquko A
fQj xksVh fcNus yxha tyus yxs vyko AA
      Qkxqu dk vlj&
Qkxqu us vkdj fd;k] dqN ,sls vfHklkj A
[k.M&[k.M gksrh xbZ] la;e dh  nhokj AA
      xehZ ds bl nksgs esa 'ys"k dk lqUnj iz;ksx gqvk gS&
?kqVh&?kqVh lh dksBjh ugha gok dk uke A
ubZ cgw dk ^tsB* us thuk fd;k gjke AA
      ^ikuh* ij dsfUnzr vatqe dk ;g nksg Hkh izHkkoh gS&
thou ,d fuca/k&lk ;ksa ik, foLrkj A
ikuh gh  izLrkouk]  ikuh  milagkj AA
      Jh v'kksd vatqe us O;oLFkk vkSj jktuhfr ij Hkh cgqr lqUnj nksgs fy[ks gSa&        
jktuhfr   rsjk gqvk] mQ~ ;s dSlk gky A
tks Hkh eqxkZ ck¡x ns mldks djs gyky AA

vjh O;oLFkk Kkr gS tks  gS  rsjs  ikl A
varghu cspSfu;k¡] eqV~Bh Hkj lYQkl AA

csdkjh ,sls u dj] vjh ?kkr ij  ?kkr A
tqxuw Hkh djus yxsa vkxtuh dh ckr AA
      eq>s iwjk fo'okl gS fd v'kksd ^vatqe* ds cgqjaxh nksgksa dk ;g laxzg lkfgR; txr esa [kwc izfr"Bk ik,xk vkSj viuh fof'k"V vfHkO;fDr ds dkj.k vusd nksgs ikBdksa o Jksrkvksa dh tqcku ij cSBsaxsA esjh gkfnZd 'kqHkdkeuk,¡ A


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